Ahhh, new week, new story. This one is a prequel novella to The Vista. Comments welcomed.
Teaser graphic by Gabrielle Prendergast of Cover Your Dreams
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S. A. Hoag, Writer
Sci-Fi with a streak of rebellion.
I love the sense of intimacy in this snippet. I do have one suggestion, and I promise it’s minor. I like how you posted the snippet on the image, but on my computer that image is really tiny and it took me awhile to realize that was a snippet and not just cover text. It might not be a bad idea to enlarge the picture and center it. Just a thought 🙂
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Thank you!
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I had the SAME problem Jess did, re the image! Once I found the snippet, I enjoyed it very much and want to read more. Great excerpt…
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I figured it out, thank you for letting me know!
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Their exchange is sultry. I like it.
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Very sweet, sexy bit of dialogue. Beautiful cover, too!
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I like having the cover image in the background. So there’s a little fraternization going on with these two?
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